Comments : Fool to love you

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    A poem that shines a spot light on the shadowed reality.

    just a few typos:

    Here is your poem amended, I hope you don't mind:

    I am fool to love you;
    Only fools would wait and sit
    Every night listening Frank Sinatra.
    Only fools get up every Day
    In the hope of getting a call from him;
    Like he would be God or some kind of
    A God status with his picture, a perfect Smile.
    He never makes mistakes,
    He's all angelic and innocent
    So why I bother to dream of him?

    Well done Noor.

    Take care,

    Michael