My demon

by NOOR   Nov 12, 2015


Decieving eyes of angel
Deep blue jewels Hypnotize me
I can not turn my head away
Like a chain around my neck
I become a prisoner
He drag me to a cave
And tells me shadows on Wall are real
I believe all
And follow those demon eyes of death

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark and powerful piece, Noor. Very well written.
    All I would suggest is that you add an 's' to drag so 'he drags me to a cave'.
    Aside from that, this is a great little write. Well done and all the best,
    Ben

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