by Darren Nov 14, 2015
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Just before he fell, |
by Ben Pickard
No effort, Darren - a pleasure. |
by Ben Pickard
Darren - this is brilliant. The best yet, in my opinion. There is comedy to this piece, of course - but that is the superficial side of this poem. It's real excellence comes in the bitter truth of it. I was actually sad by the end of it; I was expecting a comic twist, but the truth of it hit me first, if that makes sense. |
by Darren
Thanks again Ben, you have done really well to keep going. |