Oh I love your poems so much.... Really glad you reposted this pieces.... sighs... You know how to grab the reader with powerful and in your face wording... love this!!

Good God, man, these are wonderful! I know I said I would stop, but I am gripped, not least by your powerful, gripping and thoroughly detailed writing. Dare I suggest that these are getting better as I go? lol
Truly, all jokes aside, this mammoth work is a real achievement from what I've read so far. How long did it take you?
And now I really must go - my kids are crying in hunger! For myself, the "eject brain tissue" has just about ruined my once healthy appetite!
All the best Darren - I will continue tomorrow.
Ben

Wow! am left without words to express my feelings or emotions towards this beautifully composed poem. Creating a virtual that lights up the imagination from within to capture the essence of the image portrayed in your poem. Least I can say is, well done.

All the best
Busy Poet.

Wow! This is good stuff Darren!
Have read it several times now. This is great work.
And yes, Death is always the winner...
When will man ever learn!

This is excellent.. Why can I give it just a 5? Lol

Such captivating words and beauty in your writing