What a relief (Senyru)

by Mr. Darcy   Nov 15, 2015


I awake and sense
a warm wetness down below:
burst water bottle.

michael
2015

*Inspired by Ben P's pee.

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  • 8 years ago

    by The Po whet

    Truly humorous and yeah what a relief! nice work Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael. Thought I would look back over peoples older pieces and I came across this one of yours and I thought "hmm what could he mean but with you it would never be rude" right? lol ;)

    Anyway a fantastic and funny senyru which packs a punch line to make anyone laugh out loud well it did me anyway.
    Also, would have liked to have seen Bens pee poem haha
    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by NOOR

    This poem bursts humour just like a hot water bottle How lovely :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by NOOR

    This poem bursts humour just like a hot water bottle How lovely :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    You have a hot water bottle in bed?
    At your age?! lol!

    • 9 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      I do Peter...
      and it has a bunny rabbit case. (0;