Hello Noor,

This is teriffically sad. The simile of the moon and yourex is great. I especially like how his fullness is due to all the poor women he has hurt and broke their hearts. The end where your tears splash into his moon reflection and his open is creepy, yet brilliant. Then to have him reach out and pull you under to drown is shocking. This is very powerful Noor.

It could be tweaked in places, but essentially it is amazing.

Well done.

Michael

P.s let me know if you want any help.
((Hugs))

As Michael say, a wonderful and sad piece oozing with imagery.
A very good write. All the very best

Ben