Comments : My deal with the devil.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "Death took my body, too bad he forgot my soul."

    ^^^^^
    Excellent line here in a very good write.

    *Just one suggestion "for great and amazing deeds" rather than "amazingly deeds".

    All the very best and well done,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The devil is busy and he is out there.I like how you worded it"he took my body but forgot your soul"
    Great write