Comments : Truth

  • 9 years ago

    by Shruti

    Hello Kara,
    welcome to poems & quotes.
    A nice poem.
    In the second line, should it be "no such thing 'as' heaven" instead of 'a' heaven?
    Do correct me if I'm wrong.
    I felt some kind of sadness in this poem. Often times we feel hopeless and question His existence...and that's alright. Just know that sadness is not eternal.
    Simple poem. I like its depth. Keep writing and remember that you're not alone.
    :-)
    ~S