What. a sad piece with an extremely powerful last few lines.
Well done abd all the best,
Ben

A sad write indeed and very powerful.

Ohh this is very sad...

I do like how it flows while reading.. To miss someone from the past can be daunting... it creates an ache that wont let go of the heart... in time it eases up, but the memories never fade... beautifully written!

I liked this a lot. It didn't stick to a rigid format but it still had flow. Well done!

Hi, this is a sad, powerful, raw write.
Loved the rhyming. Missing someone so much can hurt but I guess we learn with time to deal with it...
Em