A walk in the park

by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez   Nov 22, 2015


Walking alone by a desolate park
Shouldn't have been there, it was well after dark
I heard a noise, quite like a bark
I'll be honest it caught me off guard "Where you from dawg?"
Came the question from a guy who was probably.... the same age as me...
Some voice, whispered, Don't stand there: Flee!
Yet another told me to stand still,
From my pocket I took out a dollar bill,
And said:
Where I'm from this is worth more than your life.
Your dad bailed 'Cus he was a lowlife,
Now You think you know strife?
At 10 I carried a knife,
By 11 I had used it twice,
And from very early I realized.
The where I'm from
In That hell I called home
Fools put a nine to your dome
For a quarter let it be known.
Every single one is worse than Satan's spawn.
I grew up Surrounded by this.
How in the hell am I supposed to find inner peace?
When I hadn't even seen lion king yet
But friends with holes on their neck?
Yes sir, you bet
What else can u expect?
When killing your brother is just another step to earn respect..
And I'm About to turn this fool's face into mince
Ready to lynch, my fist was clinched.... except....
The other guy was gone
The reflection from the water pond
The only thing staring back at me.
Now I didn't know whether to stay or flee.
But The one thing I knew well,
Is that in that place... home isn't better than hell

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  • 7 years ago

    by Hellon

    Fredy...I normally only comment on poems if the member is signed it at the same time as me so...to my regret, I have not read any of your work to date...my bad!

    This is an excellent write taking us through your life and then..bang! that twist at the end! Really enjoyed this one :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A very quirky write.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hard-hitting, well told, excellently rhymed and held me intrigued to the end. I could almost imagine this rapped!

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

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