Hard-hitting, well told, excellently rhymed and held me intrigued to the end. I could almost imagine this rapped!

Well done and all the best,

Ben

A very quirky write.
Em

Fredy...I normally only comment on poems if the member is signed it at the same time as me so...to my regret, I have not read any of your work to date...my bad!

This is an excellent write taking us through your life and then..bang! that twist at the end! Really enjoyed this one :)