Goodbye darling

by NOOR   Nov 26, 2015


Goodbye my love

I am standing on a cliff
Wind is tickling coldly my back
We had our moments
We had our trips

I am writing goodbyes
Want to thank you
For everything you dix
And things you didn't

Goodbye my love

Take good care of yourself
When I am not here to guard you

Goodbye

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    When one door closes another one open. It's time to let go and move on. We are starting a new chapter. Take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello my dear...

    The one good thing about a goodbye is this: its followed by a new chapter. A chance to rewrite the page. An opportunity to live the life that you want and deserve.

    All the best on your rewrite.

    (((Hugs))) xx

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another sad and tragic poem!
    Are things that bad in Finland?! lol!
    Seriously, a good poem with a sad message.
    Nice work!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark poem this, Noor, but full of emotion.

    All the very best,
    Ben

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