Grandfather's Hands

by Larry Chamberlin   Nov 30, 2015


My grandfather owned a farm in Ireland;
he was everything to that land:
plowman, repairman, veterinarian
and moon-shiner
(making his potcheen).

When he came home
his hands were dirty and oily.
Grandma glared at him
so long as he stayed
in the family room.

Yet, when the stew was served
and his bread set beside his bowl,
he emerged from the washroom
hands so clean a banker would admire.

"A gentleman is how you present
yourself, not what you do to live" and
to emphasize it, he'd break his roll
just as he said "present"
and dipped it at the word "live."

However long he worked and toiled
he never lost that sense of pride;
no menial task nor shoveling shit
could tarnish it for good.

Even when back from the pub
he was tipsy but not sloven;
solved all the problems of Eire
and John Bull's troubles, too;
but his cronies never saw anger,
just his normal stubborn Mick.

Through life I've seen men
of higher station and wealth,
but judged by the standards
of this old curmudgeon
not one had hands so clean.

[Hellon's Hands Contest; Prompt: http://static1.squarespace.com/static/555e28d1e4b05809c67d2fe0/t/556515cae4b06e124882af82/1432688155861/old-hands.jpg]

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  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    This was such a lovely write and it reminded me of my old dad who was a motor mechanical and always smelt of oil, tobacco and on the weekend...whiskey. He took pride in donning his shirt, tie and wedding ring for a weekend out but, his hands told the truth of an honest man who done an honest weeks work....Nice job Larry.

    • 8 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thanks, Hellon, and especially thanks for the prompt.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A truly beautifully written and well crafted piece, Larry. Your admiration for this man shines through like a burning sun!

    "A gentleman is how you present yourself, not what you do to live"

    ^^^^^^

    I love that line, simply because I relate to it perfectly. I have three children and I do not care what one of them ends up doing as long as they are good people who live their lives honestly and treat others well; happiness will follow, I hope.

    A lovely write, Larry, and one I got lost in.

    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yup...grandparents have a way to amuse us and at the same time teach us some lessons which will always stick in our minds. I liked this story/poem it unfolds step by step in order for the reader to follow..nice write :)

    making his potcheen

    ^^Just was wondering what is a potcheen..?

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