Comments : Grandfather's Hands

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yup...grandparents have a way to amuse us and at the same time teach us some lessons which will always stick in our minds. I liked this story/poem it unfolds step by step in order for the reader to follow..nice write :)

    making his potcheen

    ^^Just was wondering what is a potcheen..?

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A truly beautifully written and well crafted piece, Larry. Your admiration for this man shines through like a burning sun!

    "A gentleman is how you present yourself, not what you do to live"

    ^^^^^^

    I love that line, simply because I relate to it perfectly. I have three children and I do not care what one of them ends up doing as long as they are good people who live their lives honestly and treat others well; happiness will follow, I hope.

    A lovely write, Larry, and one I got lost in.

    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    This was such a lovely write and it reminded me of my old dad who was a motor mechanical and always smelt of oil, tobacco and on the weekend...whiskey. He took pride in donning his shirt, tie and wedding ring for a weekend out but, his hands told the truth of an honest man who done an honest weeks work....Nice job Larry.

    • 8 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thanks, Hellon, and especially thanks for the prompt.