Grey water

by NOOR   Nov 30, 2015


Sad smile
After all these years
I don't mean much to you
My sadness is flowing river
I sharpen my knife
My worst night mare happened
I became nobody
To you

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is brilliantly executed, Noor. I love everything about this little piece. The title is excellent - which is always a plus in shorter work as it can be an extra line almost - and then the end:

    "My worst nightmare happened
    I became nobody
    to you"

    Truly heart breaking

    Take care, Noor and all the best
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by NOOR

      Thanks for comment. Glad you liked it. :-)

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