by Samuel Ernst Dec 1, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
My thoughts get so loud I can't hear the sound of life setting in, |
Very raw and honest. I particularly love the first line "My thoughts get so loud I can't hear the sound of life setting in". I feel like, as poets one of our roles it to find new ways to say things that are said so much they lose meaning. We break cliched phrases and bring back meaning. I feel like your first line did just that. |