by Maher Dec 1, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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An itch begins inadvertently |
by Em
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Such a unique and sincere piece |
by Maple Tree
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Judging comment |
by Maher
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Thank you ma'am and many thanks for taking the time to enjoy it :) |
by Ben Pickard
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Maher - well done on the win for this wonderful piece. |
by Maher
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Thank you sir. Very much appreciated :) |
by Hellon
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Oh this reads much better now. Just a little tweak here and there has made the flow a lot better...hope you agree? |
by Maher
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Definitely! Thanks for pointing it out Hellon. It's hard to notice these things unless you have someone there to check it for you :) |
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This caught my attention and I had to read it a few times myself.Excellent written and I hope you win this one.Add to my favorite. All the best. |
by Maher
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) |