This truly is a powerful piece, Busy, filled with wonderful imagery and language. There's lots of very thoughtful lines sprinkled throughout this piece, and I love poetry that makes me think.
All the best,
Ben

You have so perfectly worded all the thoughts I have had with regards to religion, heaven and hell, good and evil.

"Humans being, the mortals are said to have the power of choice,
but it ain't a choice if it's dictated to fit the purpose of those considered immortals."

This line^^^ says it all for me, in fact if you had ended it here it would have been a cataclysmic ending to a very thought provoking piece.

A brilliant write altogether.