Comments : Its 9pm and I'm honest

  • 9 years ago

    by Britt

    Get out of my head, Yaki! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

  • 9 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Yaki,

    I am absolutely in love with this poem and you know why don't you? It's because of that last stanza. It's beautiful and one hundred percent correct. I relate to it because I do most of those things when I write poetry. I'm so glad you wrote a poem that resonates with my soul at this time. I haven't written anything in a while because I've been searching for the honesty you have presented here. Love this, love you.

    Mel