by Gasttlee Dec 3, 2015
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When I wake up in the morning, |
by Ben Pickard
A lovely love poem here which actually made me feel like picking up a guitar and singing along as I read! |
by Gasttlee
Thanks. |
Interesting way so convening your love for someone quite beautiful. The only flaw I saw in this poem was in the first stanza putting "yes I do" it just didn't go with me but then again what do I know? I tend to lean away from love poems. |
by Gasttlee
You know plenty more than you know, I'm sure and thanks for the feedback. |