Comments : My Love

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Interesting way so convening your love for someone quite beautiful. The only flaw I saw in this poem was in the first stanza putting "yes I do" it just didn't go with me but then again what do I know? I tend to lean away from love poems.

    All the best
    Mori

    • 8 years ago

      by Gasttlee

      You know plenty more than you know, I'm sure and thanks for the feedback.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely love poem here which actually made me feel like picking up a guitar and singing along as I read!
    Beautifully penned.

    All the best,

    Ben