Rituals of the Evening

by GB   Dec 4, 2015


Rituals of the Evening

Answers from heaven,
pretty Hesperides longing for embracement

December's fallen crystals.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Sai Vara Prasad Potharaju

    Simple yet effective... Beautiful write... Kudos!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    Breathtaking title that forms nicly into a lovely and elegant little nature gem!

    Hesperides : The three nymph daughters of night or light.. Greek mythology at it's finest displayed.

    What a magical, mystical and dazzling poem this is. very creative and true elegance comes to life in just a few lines.

    I was captivated with this poem, just brilliant!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Congratulations on this win. Lovely to see this short piece recognised for how clever it is.

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Oh, thank you very much, Ben :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Samia,

    This was so beautiful. I saw an image of golden angels twirling in the darkening sky and transforming into beautiful crystals blessing the earth with their presence:)

    Well done!

    Much love and a kiss,
    Ingrid

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Hey Ingrid, thank you.

      I like that interpretation!

      Hugging

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A beautiful write.