Hello,

This is inspiring and new. We often look to others for words of wisdom, but the reality is this: we know what is right and wrong. We often ignore our gut feeling, the warning sirens in our heads and lead with our hearts. This poem reminds us, this reader that sometimes the best advice comes from within - we only have to listen...

A couple of tips if you want them...

You are too young and too much of an amateur
to be looking for clues where there are none.

Instead, my dear,
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just do what you have been doing all along;
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write what you feel, feel what you write,
and let your imagination run wild...
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in due time,
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you'll come to know
where creativity
is born
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full stop.

Very good and a message that we all need to absorb: Listen to our hearts as it is often the wisest one we will hear.

Take care,

Michael

When our inner gut let's us know that something isn't right it usually is. Sometimes we turn to others for advise and all it does make it worse. Well written

We are our best teachers, advisers and guides. Really this isn't an amateur thought but a matured thinking..take care dear :)