Comments : Raeleionha Roxanne Rosetta

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hazel,

    Your use of description and language in this is superb - this really is a rich piece of writing that I got completely lost in.

    Damn you, woman, you have made it so I have no nominations left - and it's only Tuesday!

    NOMINATED! lol

    All the best

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Hahahaha thank you ben those are very kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem.

      yaay my first nomination in like a month hahahaa

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow. I read it more then once. This is amazing. Like. Ben said I don't have any votes left. This is certainly a winner.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Amazing. This pulled me in then spat me back out and i don't mean it in a bad way lol just gutted it had ended so i read it again and was amazed all over again.
    Your describing words are very powerful.
    Loved it