The last three lines of this are superb, Noor. The language used is lovely.

A good poem overall and another sad write from you.

Do take care,
Ben

A sad write Noor, but worded beautifully, with great imagery.
As Ben says, the last three lines are especially well expressed, they just couldn't be better!
Wish I'd thought of those verses!
I liked this.

Hello,

As Ben says, the ending is excellent. A chilling threat.

Take care,

Michael