Comments : Someday, I will Live

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent - the detail in parts of this piece is exquisite.

    "I will hide in the crevices of your hands" and "a red sun, red as meat" are just two examples. The imagery created throughout is wonderful.

    A really well written poem. Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You know that I love dark poetry and you have done a super job with this one.Add to my favorite. Hope to see more.

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Ha! and as much as I love writing dark poetry, I fear that I may go into the dark side if I write more of that...

      though from time to time, it wouldn't hurt.

      Thank you.

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Regarding your last comment; can't have sunlight without shadows. That said, love this piece!

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Oh, that was inspiring. I'll see if I can finally focus on wriitng as soon as my finals end.