Hello Busy,

I love this - it really is a well written piece with some great lines.

"The calmness within became a burden, a flicker of what my life should have been"

^^^^^

A really sad and moving piece of writing.

All I would say is that the last line should read as "....will have forgotten the real look of my sinful soul" - rather than "forgot".

All the best and I am nominating this one.
Ben

A sad piece and it touched my heart.

A sad poem Busy poet, but one with great lines and message which I liked.
Well penned and interesting piece.