My mind is a temple in ruins

by Everlasting   Dec 14, 2015


I can't let my thoughts wander,
my mind is a temple in ruins,
there's debris and weak foundations,
Thus, If by chance,
I let them wandered,
my mind and I, could collapse

And kill them with me along.

Dec 12, 2014

Written by : L.L

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  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    We always think that the heart is the most powerful but in every way the mind is. For once it collapses everything goes. Negative or positive it holds the reigns! Good one Luce dear :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A powerful write. If we don't concentrate on keeping our thoughts focused, sometimes there is a real danger of the mind simply collapsing.
    My only suggestion would be "I can't let my thoughts WANDER" instead of "Wandered"

    Excellent write and all the best,
    Ben

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