Stupid whirlwind

by Melissa   Dec 17, 2015


Perhaps it was you who
titillated the air with a
breezy tone
to see if I caught wind and
blew blue
into our grey matter

Or maybe I
flirted within a metaphor
of luscious language and limbs,
tangling about in strewn syllables and
question marks that swerve
more often than say

but who's asking?

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Melissa,
    This really is an excellent write, with wonderful use of language throughout.
    "....flirted within a metaphor of luscious language and limbs."
    ^^^^^
    Wonderful alliteration here which is a pleasure to read.

    Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

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