This is intense. I often wonder myself the purpose of life and where did time go. There is no easy answer. You said it so well. Take care

What a great piece. This really touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes.
Take care Cindy

Hello Michael,

Great job here. The rhyme and alliteration are a real treat for the reader. The content though morbid has been beautifully executed by painting a picture that many of us can relate to.

Well done on this win. Bravo!

Take care

Michael

Congrats on the win! I love the dark melancholia of this verse! The rhyming is good without being forced, with vivid images of life and death, fate, and the swift passage of our time.

This poem asks one to contemplate as we all know its truth from the first line: For all intended purpose
my life is almost over

well done

Congratulations on your win!
Take care
Cindy