Oooooo.... Speechless

Hello,
This poem has transfixed me. This story is painfully sad and reflects aspects that I recognise in others and even myself to some degree.
Her pain was born before the skater park days though. Such lack of dignity and respect stems from earlier days. Perhaps this story is even harder to tell?
You have skillfully woven her life of sex, drugs and weilding her heart of metal. Nothing will hurt that, not anymore. Another lie, but I fear she knows thats the biggest lie of all.

A fantastic write and one thats gone into my favourites.

Take care,

Michael

This certainly caught my eye. Add to my favorite

Congratulations. A well deserved win.

Take care.

Michael

Loved the raw reality of this piece, and I'm happy it got the recognition it deserved, you depicted it as it really is in reality...awesome job, congrats.

Judging comment

Mary Anne has written an in depth look at a true wild heart. what a powerful and tasteful poem she has written this week!

an inside look at addiction and how devastation can overtake the untamed heart. I was mesmerized by her word choice and the way she wrote this. Just a wonderful and inspirational poem!