Hello,

A lovely Sonnet with an important message.

The flow is good throughout. Although on the 2nd line I think could be improved like this:

'Too crowded, full of prayers and full of song'

Apart from that this Sonnet reads well.

Take care,

Michael

This is a well written sonnet, but much more than that the message is loud and clear . The irony of the "Son" taking offense to the temple being a forum of commerce is well reflected 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>

A powerful message you have brought across here

I really enjoyed this piece. You hit things right on. To many people don't realize what is important this time of year.
Excellent.
Take care
Cindy