See you again

I liked the emotion of your poem and as said by others favourite part for me also is the idea of your beautiful flower leaning on your shoulder.

I'm surprise that, of the comments you've receive so far, no one has corrected your little spelling errors. Yes, I can see English will not be your first language but...the errors are very minor and will take seconds to correct, making the poem better....the content is fine BTW :)

To me my love,
a beutiful flower you were. *beautiful*
i liked the way you leaned on my shoulders,
with your arm round my waist. *Capitalize the I here*

all i craved for was a smile *and again with the I*
just to stare at your dimples.
but....

without a bye you went
where to? av no idea *I've*
giving me sleeples nights *sleepless*
and in my heart,
a wound never to heel *heal*

i still love you and *I*
can't hide the feelings
but dear,when
will i see you again? *I*

A lovely write, Peter and as Mr Darcy (Michael) says, you have poured your heart out with honesty here.
All the very best,
Ben

Love is a wonderful feeling and she was your flower. She left and you don't know why but she has a special place in your heart. Thank you for sharing. Take care

Hello Peter,

Welcome to P&Q.

I like the feel of this poem. You have poured your heart out. I like the simille of the flower. Beautiful indeed.

There are a few typos, but that didn't distract me from seeing the honesty on the page. I look forward to seeing more work from you.

Take care,

Michael