Dead dreams

by NOOR   Dec 22, 2015


I wanted to tell
how beautiful you look
I wanted to taste
All your innocense of first snow
If there was a mountain between us
it wouldn't have stopped me to reach you
All because I loved you
More than life itse of
Now all I have
Is empty hands

Poet is dead
Long live poet

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    I hope you are well.

    A powerful poem here. They say love can over come all, but that is only if love was present in the first place.

    (((Hugs)))

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Noor,

    Another heart-breaking little piece with some wonderful imagery. I love the idea of innocence being compared to that of 'first snow'

    Well done and stay well,
    Ben

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