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by NOOR Dec 22, 2015 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
I wanted to tell how beautiful you look I wanted to taste All your innocense of first snow If there was a mountain between us it wouldn't have stopped me to reach you All because I loved you More than life itse of Now all I have Is empty hands Poet is dead Long live poet
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Noor, I hope you are well. A powerful poem here. They say love can over come all, but that is only if love was present in the first place. (((Hugs))) Take care, Michael
by Ben Pickard
Noor, Another heart-breaking little piece with some wonderful imagery. I love the idea of innocence being compared to that of 'first snow'Well done and stay well, Ben