No matter the friends, family members around us we still feel like an outcast. For each individual has his/her own battle to fight, things to achieve and questions to answer. Till the time come for us we just have to complete our purpose and fulfill our goals...nicely penned Cindy...take care.

Even sadness has so much purity in it. Everything written is coming from heart & that's where it pinches while reading.
Death will not take our beliefs away or the impression that we leave behind.
Time to celebrate the breaths we have :)

Loved your poem & congrats again for winning the contest :)

all the best & take care

We can be amongst friends or family and still feel like we don't belong. We all have a purposes in life we may not know what exactly it is at times but keep on going and fulfill your dreams and goals. A sad and we'll penned write. Take care

A fully deserved win Cindy and a truly excellent write - well done on this and great to see you with a new poem posted to your account.
Take care and I hope you are well,
Ben

Hello Cindy,

A well executed poem, showing pained emotion from personal experience.

Well done,

Take care,

Michael
((Hugs))
XxX

Outstanding poem. It sent chills up my spine what some of us must endure in this life. Keep up the great writing.

Ben thompson

Congrats on the win! I knew it was a good one! Very well structured, with perfect rhythm and rhyme scheme! Emotional and poignant to read!

Always a masterpiece work! Congrats Cindy!

Cheers,
Ray

Hey Cindy,
Congrats on the win, nice to see you back...
Loved the flow on this, the rhythm was smooth, just the right pace to draw out the emotion...truly a great piece
Love
xx

Congratulations Dear....very well deserved win :)

Keep writing :)

Excellent. thank you for this written piece.

Judging comment

Cindy writes from her heart and soul and this poem made me cry. Just a heart warming poem that touches the reader.

Each line allows the reader to feel her tears, fear and emotions.. just heart gripping!

PS....love you :-(

Last poem of my mother's I ever got to hear. She knew she didn't have much time left when she wrote this. 5 short weeks later she lost consciousness and passed there after. Reading it now brings a lot of emotion forth.

Reading this 2 years on has brought me a lump to my throat. I miss you, Cindy. x

Miss You Yaar...

Beautiful poem
You will be missed for sure.

Still missing your presence in this world. Somehow, reading your words connect me to you still.

:(

I remember you posting this. It seemed prophetic then and more so now looking back. I also remember the kindness you showed me and the emails we shared. I hope you are resting peacefully, Cindy.