I'm so glad you had this title contest in the club. Especially since it got you writing again. The visuals you have penned in this piece are great. There is sadness in your words but I also feel hope. I love the ending stanza. How befitting to your title.
Excellent job!
Love you yaar
Cindy

I see this is your first poem in quite a while (posted here, anyway) and as Cindy says, the visuals you have crafted here are excellent. A great piece with a lovely flow. Good to see you writing again, from the site's point of view and from one club member to another!
All the very best and take care,
Ben

I was unsure whether to vote for this one or the other one. hehe. Lovely write. It's mysterious and creative at the same time. One can gather plenty from reading it ( of course with their own interpretation, perhaps not what it was intended). I take, the overall poem, talks about life and dead. I specially like these lines:

Life been sometimes kind to me
Hoping for end to be same

^ that's what hints about dead. The poem seems to come from an astronauts point of view. Finally, seeing Earth and remembering perhaps a loved one as he is about to descend. Towards the end, it gives the impression that he finally arrived on Earth and that Doctors are treating him but at the same time, it gives the impression that he is seeing the light. ( if you know what I mean).

I'm glad to see another poem from you.

Merry Christmas. ( even though is not yet)

So talented and creative you are .We should see more from you.
Reminds me of Near Death Experiences ..........with a perfect title.

So talented and creative you are .We should see more from you.
Reminds me of Near Death Experiences ..........with a perfect title.

Beautifully written poem with great visuals and Rhyming flow. Really enjoyed reading it.

Wow, this blew me away. Beautifully written, a heart touching reflective write.

Very nice and heart touching poem