by abdulrahman helmy Mar 16, 2003
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
WHY DID WE BRAKE UP? |
by MEMI
Aww its cute |
by tiara
Hey your poem like it so confused me words were like every were try to fix it hun |
by Mary
Hey u dont have to make it long to be good try and use higher words and i might give you a good or even an excellent. I am very hard in checking poems i want you to improve |
by Jessica
WOw so i broke up with my boyfriend 2 months ago we both practically in love for 2 years now its over and he HATES Me becuz my cuzin yelled @ him and he thinks i did it purposily but i wouldnt do that 2 him ever and now he is happy and i sit here and cry every nite i ask myself why did we break up? but this poem was really inspirational....i just hope GOd has a good plan for me... :) well good job |