In love <3!

I like nature poems and I always look for rhythm, rhymes and/or flow. I must say that this one flowed smoothly without breaking the reader's thoughts and it draws a picture of love.

The moon is like a king one who sits up high and can only be admired not touched. Honestly I kept reading and re-reading to see if there was an abrupt stop in the wording of the poem and found none. A lovely read in fact its enchanting!

Andrea this is really beautiful.
Take care Cindy
*hugs

Hello,
this is delcious. The way you portray the moon as a constant, reliable friend. The one who loves unconditionally. We all need that special someone don't we?

My favourite part: when you held my hand by the river.
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I can see the reflection. Just the sight fueled the will power.

Also, the word 'twiggy' - loved it!!

A splendid piece of writing.

Take care,

Michael