Over

by Allie   Jan 1, 2016


She sits in the dark, wondering what the hell went wrong, she silently screams for a cure to the pain. The emptyness is to heavy for her too take. She wonders why nobody is listening. What does she have to do to make these feelings go away? So she cuts away the pain and sighs a temporary release. As she sits in the dark blood dripping from her arm, the anxiety kicks in that it's not over, it's never gonna be over. She fights these feelings, she tries to open her mind that there's something better, that she has purpose, but the feelings taking over, she's screaming on the inside. She needs a release, she needs to know she's still breathing. So she cuts away the pain, but the feelings still there, she don't know what else to do, she grabs the revolver, And with a click, click, boom. It's finally over.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such a personal piece which others can relate to.
    Written well

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      I try to keep my writting as real as possible, I want people to relate to what I write, to let them know they aren't alone. I know what that feels like and it sucks!

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    A really dark and depressing poem. But still very good.
    Umm...look at the 5th line -
    "The emptyness is to heavy for her to take"
    ^I think it should be 'emptiness' and 'too'...
    Overall it's very nice.
    & welcome to Poems and Quotes.
    Keep writing.
    5/5
    ~S

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      Thank you, I didn't even notice that!

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      Thank you! I didn't even notice that!

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