Comments : One lifetime is not enough

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "If you'll be my Bonnie then I'll be your Clyde"

    ^^^^

    Love that, Matthew. The whole of this piece flows beautifully and was a pleasure to read.
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    This is brilliant!!! The bonnie and clyde extract that Ben quoted caught my eye and I was not dissapointed.

    Nominated!! brilliant piece with an incredible flow.

    • 8 years ago

      by Matthew Alexander

      Thank you very much! I really appreciate the kind words.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Matthew,
    This is a such a sweet love poem. I believe the best ones rhyme, just like yours.

    Well done and take care.

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a sweet Love poem Matthew!
    I liked the reference to Bonnie and Clyde. Clever.
    I enjoyed this a lot. Love poems are always my favourite.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is a lovely piece

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    The only technical error I noticed was the line:
    "when your by my side". "Your" is supposed to be "you're".

    Cute write!
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awwwwww, Matt, this is very very sweet. My heart just turned into a marshmallow. :-)