Comments : The tone of Friendship

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    Aw, so beautiful, lovely and so very sweet! By reading this I'm feeling like I'm surrounded by flowers...butterflies all around with the gorgeous sunlight...of friendship...
    Well, but have a look at the last second line. I think it should be 'nod' instead of 'nid'.
    Overall, I really like this.
    5/5 from me.
    Write more more more......
    *& tell me ok who it is about :).*
    ~S

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    I really beautiful and sweet. Keep it up daer.

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Its really beautiful and sweet. Keep it up daer.

  • 8 years ago

    by Aashi

    I really agree to the above comments.
    It's lovely.
    5.

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    It's so lovely and sweet! :0