by Allie Jan 6, 2016
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I'm trapped in my own mind, a world of darkness, a place so cold and lonely. I'm searching for answers, I'm looking for the light. I'm stuck in time where one moment repeats and repeats. It's driving me insane. I'm trapped in my own mind and can't seem to figure out why. I hate myself for what you did to me, I hate the fact that you took apart of me that was meant for someone else, someone who cared. You used me, you abused me. I get sick to my stomach knowing I'm stuck in time, because of you. You still control me, I'm constantly on repeat. I'm stuck in my own mind but I've figured out why. That's exactly where you want me to be, asking myself why, blaming myself. You made me pick up that razor and you made her pull that trigger. See our stories aren't so different. We let someone take control of our mind, we let them choose our fate. If your stuck in your own mind, you gotta get out. That's a dangerous place to be. |
by Milo
The mind can be your own prison. |
by Rsan
This here is very intense and most people including me can relate to it..Keep up the excellent writing |
by Em
Alot of people could relate to this piece. Very deep and meaningful. |
by Allie
Very true, this was written for my first one, "Over", as to why she did it. Thank you |
by Ciara
This poem is exactly like my poems so i think we may have the same back story. If you want 2 talk or anything hit me up. Its a very well written poem & i feel every word. Read mine if you like. |
by Ben Pickard
Hi Allie and welcome to the site. |
by Allie
Thank you Ben! |