by Ben Pickard
Cassie - this is wonderful. The meter is absolutely flawless - I think each line has eight syllables - and so lends the poem an absolutely perfect flow. The imagery too, as usual, is outstanding and your use of language a pleasure to read. I love how you have rhymed the last word of each stanza. This really is an accomplished piece of writing and certainly one of the best pieces of poetry I have read on this site. I'm speechless..... |
Thanks so much Ben. You really know how to make me blush :) |
by Ben Pickard
Yes, I frequently have that effect on the ladies, lol :) |
by Cindy
Cassie |
Thanks for the lovely words Cindy. :) |
by Ben Pickard
I know this has an hm, but I will vote for this and put it up for nomination again this week - this is a superb poem. |