The Voices

by UniqueAddictions   Jan 12, 2016


Can you hear my voices ?
Can you hear my cries ?
Can you see the way , their killing me inside ?
Do you know their here , watching from my eyes ?

There are voices in my head and sometimes they kinda take control.
There's more than one me , did I tell you I have 3 souls ?

The voices talk to me you-know , they try to get me to do bad things. It really scares me when they get very quite , then they all start to sing.

Knock ! Knock ! Hello , I'm in your head . Bang ! Bang ! I want you dead . I'll kill your family , yes your friends too , but who I really want is YOU !

I tried to ignore them at first I promise you at first I tried . But i can't get rid of them , their always watching from inside .

What's that ? What's He say ? He said he loves you ? he's lying anyway.

Don't be a fool , no body's here for you . Go ahead fall for his tricks , it happened last-time too .

We're the voices in your head and everyone wants you dead !

They've asked me to kill you , so that's what I'm gonna do !

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  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    *smiles* Alright I will admit I have friends with split personalities, and they are the best kinds of friends I could ever have since they can't lie to me since one counteracts what the other says and then it turns into fun time.

    I loved how you made the poem about your split personalities and the struggle you have with them. Like Ben stated I was very enthralled by the poem it had that sweet innocence with the darkness of someone who has been battling wars inside their heads and they aren't always there all the way by the end.

    The struggle will eventually fade away hopefully in time, they will vanish since unfortunately the split personalities tend to come from the owner and it normally happens when something traumatic happens but they tend to be the ones to help not destroy unless something went wrong inside the owner's head. That being the case I apologize for this long review and hope everything in time goes well for you! :) 5/5

    - Moria Bella Bair

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Jaliyah and welcome to pnq

    Your profile says you are fourteen and so this poem displays great promise. It has a good rhyme scheme, interesting content and - most importantly - is thoroughly readable. By the end, I was engrossed!

    Well done and keep writing,
    Ben

    ps the "theirs" in the first few lines should be 'they're' - a contraction of 'they are'.

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