Hello Jaliyah and welcome to pnq

Your profile says you are fourteen and so this poem displays great promise. It has a good rhyme scheme, interesting content and - most importantly - is thoroughly readable. By the end, I was engrossed!

Well done and keep writing,
Ben

ps the "theirs" in the first few lines should be 'they're' - a contraction of 'they are'.

*smiles* Alright I will admit I have friends with split personalities, and they are the best kinds of friends I could ever have since they can't lie to me since one counteracts what the other says and then it turns into fun time.

I loved how you made the poem about your split personalities and the struggle you have with them. Like Ben stated I was very enthralled by the poem it had that sweet innocence with the darkness of someone who has been battling wars inside their heads and they aren't always there all the way by the end.

The struggle will eventually fade away hopefully in time, they will vanish since unfortunately the split personalities tend to come from the owner and it normally happens when something traumatic happens but they tend to be the ones to help not destroy unless something went wrong inside the owner's head. That being the case I apologize for this long review and hope everything in time goes well for you! :) 5/5

- Moria Bella Bair