Depression

by UniqueAddictions   Jan 13, 2016


Can you see what I've been through ?
Can you see my fears ?
Can you see my tears ?

Have you heard my cries ?
Have I spilled out my heart ?
Do you believe the words " I'm Fine " ?
Did you believe me from the start ?

Do you think I'm worthy ?
I feel as though I am ruthless
I have no feeling .

That night you said " I love you " they told me it was a lie
The voices that I hide in my mind , make up my decisions .

Can you see my pain ?
Will I get glory ?
You told me that you loved me but that was just a story .

Are you tired of that four letter frequently used word ?
The one I use all the time
I'm Fine , I'll tell you
You'll believe it
Until I spill , out onto the floor

Can you see what I've been through ?
Can you see my fears ?
Can you see my tears ?

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  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I have been here hun..
    I know exactly how you feel.
    Every day is a struggle now and forever. but you will make it through.

    hang in there babe.

    deeplydesturbed xx

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    You told me that you loved me but that was just a story .
    ^
    That was my favorite part in this entire poem, or rant as I like to call it since poetry tends to be our ranting become beautiful.

    The poem was heartfelt, I thought it needed a little more it's not bad but it had too many questions, not enough flow, and I really would have loved a more longer poem filled with more story to it if it had that many questions, I could almost understand the emotions you placed on this poem but not quiet since the questions made me a little iffy on it. Still lovely for a beginner! Welcome to the club! :)

    Sorry if I offended you, I will offer you more assistance when I know you are not mad at my comment that I made for this poem. 4/5

    - Moria Bella Bair

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