I may have a poetic past, but I've never been good at critiquing another's work. But I can tell, you, your talent certainly still shines. :)

Take care

Judging comment:

This piece flows so well, but at the same time feels 'abrupt' in the sense that each stanza doesn't depend on the previous one, and can stand on its own weight as an independent poem itself, it's a testament to the author's skill.