Comments : The one love

  • 8 years ago

    by shloka

    This doesn't look like a poem though...

  • 8 years ago

    by Rosamay

    Shloka, it doesn't matter if it is or not.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Lilith,

    I remember the first day I lusted after someone and he was lusting after someone else, it stuck in there like a knife.

    Sad yet beautiful write.

    Em