Comments : Simplicity

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Melvin

    A clever peace here. By holding us, chairs really do often hold the weight of the world - we bear it on our shoulders frequently after all.
    I love the title too - it completely mislead me, almost like a senryu might.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Melvin,

    your writing is versatile and shows off your talent. I like poems that make you think and this one does that; so much so that I best take that seat you recommended.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Melvin, this is a very clever piece. An inanimate object really doesn't know it's worth as for holding the weight of the word they do don't they. It's weird because they see alot but can't see at all.

    An elegant piece, Em