Comments : Streets of Words

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I allowed you to love me,
    even though I warned you
    to quite while you were ahead.

    ^^Did you mean quit in the last line..?

    Another write that has gotten me thinking. Once again I like the opening of your poem:

    In the streets of words,
    your old ones escape
    and your new ones become
    everything that I am lost inside,
    everything that crushes me into the gutter.

    ^^Its like tarring the road making the old pot holed ones into new. Burying whatever scars, cracks and wounds with a new layer of road/words to travel on just to make a relationship to move ahead; though you already know its ended.

    It feels like the person does not want to give a
    straight forward answer instead just piling up with false assurance until you or something between the two breaks....take care.